{"id":3150,"date":"2014-01-24T08:00:28","date_gmt":"2014-01-24T14:00:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/?p=3150"},"modified":"2014-01-24T09:19:40","modified_gmt":"2014-01-24T15:19:40","slug":"whodunit-obvious-or-unguessable","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/?p=3150","title":{"rendered":"Whodunit: Obvious or Unguessable?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Lately I&#8217;ve been reading a few mystery\/suspense books in which the &#8220;whodunit&#8221; aspect was utterly unguessable. No, I didn&#8217;t see it coming, but on the other hand, how could I have done? There were no clues. No red herring. I had no guesses at all, and when I found out it was the baker, it could just as easily have been the butcher or the candlestick maker for all the impact it had on me.<\/p>\n<p>Now, let me preface that by saying I don&#8217;t read straight mystery\/suspense. I read romantic mystery\/suspense, which may make a difference even though it shouldn&#8217;t.<\/p>\n<p>Tonight I finished &#8220;Paradise County&#8221; by Karen Robards, a book that was very suspenseful, but at the end it was just, &#8220;Oh, okay sure. If you say so.&#8221; When I put the book down I thought I&#8217;d honestly have preferred it if I&#8217;d spotted the identity of the bad guy a mile away, or if he&#8217;d been named in his point of view chapters, instead of being referred to as &#8220;The Predator,&#8221; as if knowing or not knowing his identity made the slightest bit of difference to the ending.<\/p>\n<p>The book, and other similar experiences, made me wonder if we&#8217;re so caught up on the idea of the surprise ending that we don&#8217;t correctly lay the foundation for that surprise, lest someone guess it. I figure that in a properly laid-out mystery, at least 10% of your readers (the ones who know how to pay attention) should guess it. And in a well-done romantic suspense, the fact that they guessed it shouldn&#8217;t diminish their enjoyment of the story.<\/p>\n<p>So let me turn my original question over to you guys: Obvious or unguessable? In an imperfect world, where you can only have one or the other, which is better and why?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lately I&#8217;ve been reading a few mystery\/suspense books in which the &#8220;whodunit&#8221; aspect was utterly unguessable. No, I didn&#8217;t see it coming, but on the other hand, how could I have done? There were no clues. No red herring. I had no guesses at all, and when I found out it was the baker, it [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[6,4],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-3150","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-chitchat","category-tips-for-writers"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3150","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=3150"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3150\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3151,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3150\/revisions\/3151"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=3150"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=3150"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/christineamsden.com\/wordpress\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=3150"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}